I stomped up the
stairs. The bar had been crowded and lively and dark. It was in the basement I
think and I was leaving. As I reached the streets the two bouncers nodded at me
as the third checked IDs. I’m not sure how I missed the machine that was scanning
and projecting people’s faces on tv screens.
Well fuck, there
were at least three cop cars. Four, four cop cars. The street was full of
people. I couldn’t see their faces but they were in dresses and pants and
collars. Two officers stood right next to me. They both stood wide like
statues. One held the leash of a German Shepard the other had his thumbs hooked
into his bulletproof vest. I’d imagine they both had crew cuts.
“I think she went
to the City Tavern,” I said. I pointed across the street to what seemed to be
another bar. There was a porch and a line of people. I stepped into the street.
“We need to find
Aidan,” my friend said. She was a girl and a friend from high school. Three of
us had gone out, Erica, Will, and I. We were all friends from high school. I
was moving away in a month and we had wanted to do something that got us out of
our houses and intoxicated. I saw my fourth grade teacher in line and gave her
a hug. She smiled at me and asked when we’d be going out again.
Earlier that
night I had a few beers and Erica picked me up. We stopped at a liquor store
and then we stopped at the convenience store that Aidan was managing. Aidan had
dropped out of college our freshman year. His maroon branded cap covered his pale
brown coif. He was very pale and the fluorescents lights altered him. He
shifted about the store and his eyes darted about quickly. I thought he had
been mad at me for a week and I didn’t think we’d get very far asking him for a
ride.
“My phone’s broken.
What’s up?” He said as he rang up a woman’s Coke and gum. She had a tattoo on
the back of her shoulder of birds flying away. We asked him if he’d pick us up
from the bars after work.
“Sure but my
phone’s broken. I can’t reach you.”
“Well how about
we meet you at the bookstore at 1 am.” There was only one bookstore in this
fucking town.
“The bookstore is
a bad spot. I’ll find you.” Then he went back to stock the milk gallons.
I had given up
on the girl. She had left with her friends after all even though I had just
received a text she was at The Tavern. A shimmer of dresses running up the
stairs. What time was it? 1:32 am. Got to find Aidan. Will had joined us in the
street. He’d been denied. Not for his ID but for wearing basketball shorts. He
was short and stocky and his arms waved around when he was drunk. Erica held
onto him. They mumbled something about pizza. I told them to go and that I
would find our ride.
I circled like
two bars. I think it was two bars there seemed to be a division between the
outside and the inside. The night was closing. The bartenders leaned on the
counters and some counted singles. The people were beginning to pair. The men
leaned their ears down to the dresses they were talking to. I walked back out
onto the street, away from the police and the throng of post grads and grads
and working people. I checked my phone out of habit. The air was warm and the
skin outside my t shirt hummed. My underwear had ridden up throughout the
night. I tugged at the back of my jeans and stuck my phone in my pocket. I
looked up. On the street corner was Aidan. In a Detroit Tigers baseball cap. He
was scanning the line for the tavern. The orange street lights warmed him his
skin and the neon sign from the bar glowed green across his white t shirt. It
was a pretty visible location he had chosen, there weren’t many people on that
end of the street. He was comfortable alone. He stood straight almost leaning
back on the heels of his boots. His shoulders were not rounded like mine
I grabbed his
elbow and we walked past the bright lights of the cop cars to find Erica.
Hmmm.... this one has a very cool "Noir" vibe. I"m not exactly sure, however, what its focus/theme is? Is it about the disconnected connection with Aidan? Or. There's a lot going on, and it's almost difficult to follow? Can you locate what it is that is calling this piece into being and let that impulse guide a revision?
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